Friday, March 7, 2008

#247 Haiku Reach! Comments

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Must strive to succeed
Worth having worth reaching for
Stretch with all your might
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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes
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Ben Gieske 11 October 2008

Good use of the two words, strive and stretch and “s’ sounds. The “th” words fit in and are naturally stretched and emphasized in the reading.

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rajagopal h 07 March 2008

good one.............

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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Baltimore, Maryland
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