Wednesday, March 12, 2008

#248 Haiku Cactus Comments

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Desert flowers reach
Sun burned thirst quenchers stand tall
Castles in the air
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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes
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James Mclain 05 November 2009

all water sits in air.. it's the flesh... inside thats..juicy wet..iip

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Ben Gieske 11 October 2008

“Sun burned thirst quenchers” - good description of desert flowers. They might look like castles but castles sometimes have moats filled with water. I think “in the air” nullifies the water idea.

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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Baltimore, Maryland
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