andrew Diaz

Rookie (12-7-92 / la puente ca.)

3 - Poem by andrew Diaz

me + you baby
just tell me that youre all 4 it
no worries,
no lies,
let get the wine
to pour it
if your heart is broken
let me fix
your love girl
ill never mix it
for you iwould sing
im going to be with you forever baby,
might as well get the wedding ring <3
because thts the ticket, and ill love youand itll never go unless you open up the doorbut even then ill close itand stand infront of you so u can seethat my lovee is pure and its gonna last eternity
yours truly, chris diaz.

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  • (2/7/2010 2:29:00 PM)


    good but break up the long lines for astetic consistency

    because thts the ticket,
    ill love you and itll never go
    unless you open up the door
    but even then ill close it
    stand infront of you
    so u can seethat
    my love is pure
    and its.....

    keep it up you obciously hear things in a metred rhyme
    so whos the gilr? Caught her yet?
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 7, 2010



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