andrew Diaz

Rookie (12-7-92 / la puente ca.)

Let Us Dream Shall We? - Poem by andrew Diaz

You have come to me from a distant land,
Dreamer of dreams, to fill my hearts desire,
Sweet music flowing from your nimble hand
That plays within... to light my passion's fire.

A symphony of word and thought you bring.
Excitement builds upon crescendo's sound,
Brought forth in tones to make my light heart sing
For all the beauty that, with you, I've found.

A life is changed in just an instant's time,
All darkness fled before that brillaint sun
That shines from spoken words of softest rhyme
And speaks of treasures, only just begun.

This mystic meeting gives my heart a glow
That few have seen and only you will know.

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Comments about Let Us Dream Shall We? by andrew Diaz

  • (2/7/2010 2:38:00 PM)


    Okay now we see your different style. I think this is good! But could be great!
    like: that brillaint sun IS SHE THE SUN SAY SO or ID SHE MAKE YOU SEE THE SUNLIGHT FOR THE FIRST TIME?

    This mystic meeting gives my heart a glow
    That few have seen and only you will know.
    THAT FEW HAVE SEEN OF ME THEY WAY ONLY YOU WILL
    Is that what you are saying that she know the side of you that no one knows? that hot and poetically potent, so if it is clear it up for the reader.

    Every poem should be put away for a few days and then read freshly when you are in your writers brain! Doing great, keep messaging me if you cn stand me!
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 7, 2010



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