Luis Gil de la Puente

Rookie - 296 Points (Palencia-Spain)

(3) Empty Space - Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente

It is dusk again.
Once more this time
and loneliness.

The birds are here
but the empty space
remains.

Something got lost
against the grain.
The wind blows,
silence stays.


Comments about (3) Empty Space by Luis Gil de la Puente

  • (6/13/2009 3:27:00 PM)


    simply great! ! ! ....well done..keep writting! ! ^_^

    dana
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  • (4/4/2008 9:15:00 PM)


    Spare, elegant imagery. Excellent write, Luis. Good to read you again.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 3, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, June 14, 2009


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