Luis Gil de la Puente

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((6) The Elite Of The Pure - Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente

To the chosen,
Those of evil stare,
Who spread weeds,
And administer venom,
Those who hide the keys,
And water misery,
Who cut grass
Before it grows,
Dark hate reapers,
Those who trace talent
To wipe out its footsteps,
Winners in the rat race,
adapted survivors
who establish beaten tracks,
those who hide their truth
in the fear they inspire,
always getting rot,
to you, scum.


Comments about ((6) The Elite Of The Pure by Luis Gil de la Puente

  • Drtony BrahminDrtony Brahmin (6/3/2017 7:04:00 AM)

    Who cut grass
    Before it grows,
    Dark hate reapers,
    Those who trace talent
    To wipe out its footsteps, there is so much of power in your poem.. there are facts and truths and there is so much natural anger too born from the truth....... thank you. dear poet. tony
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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (10/17/2015 4:22:00 PM)

    And water misery. Nice poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Noha El3wdy (5/27/2009 2:12:00 AM)

    those who hide their truth
    in the fear they inspire,
    always getting rot,
    to you, scum


    i will use your words to take revenge, thanks it is exactly what some people really deserve.

    wooow, i am happy now.10+++
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  • Amber Roser (2/9/2009 4:34:00 PM)

    this is amazing i absolutely love it! ! ! !
    i stumbled on to a movie called zeitgeist and ths is a perfect epitaph for the 'global elite' that it talks about.
    10/10
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  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (10/3/2008 4:05:00 AM)

    Ammmmmazing and powerful indeed............10 (Report)Reply

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  • Magda Graf (5/13/2007 2:03:00 PM)

    I don't know who 'inspired' you to write these powerful words, but I sure know some to whom they fit perfectly - alas. (Report)Reply

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  • Joscephine Gomez (5/13/2007 11:44:00 AM)

    Magnifico! This is a poem by a master of his craft. (Report)Reply

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  • Declan McHenry (7/21/2006 2:35:00 PM)

    Luis, grand stirring stuff indeed. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 21, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 18, 2010


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