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Luis Gil de la Puente
Palencia-Spain
Luis Gil de la Puente
Palencia-Spain
Wednesday, August 2, 2006
((11) Friends
Rating: ★3.2
Wholesome hearts,
well deserved friendship,
good chunks of truth
wrapped in cigarette smoke.
Singing together, playing our tune.
High school, low voices,
Coughing.... Silence, please!
A true lady is listening.
Winning together,
playing the same game,
to simply convince each other
we may be wrong.
Drinking from the same chalice,
We taste the same curse:
'Beauty,
You bring us Truth'.
Little as we are,
we look through the same keyhole
to sometimes have
a good finishing touch.
well deserved friendship,
good chunks of truth
wrapped in cigarette smoke.
Singing together, playing our tune.
High school, low voices,
Coughing.... Silence, please!
A true lady is listening.
Winning together,
playing the same game,
to simply convince each other
we may be wrong.
Drinking from the same chalice,
We taste the same curse:
'Beauty,
You bring us Truth'.
Little as we are,
we look through the same keyhole
to sometimes have
a good finishing touch.
Luis Gil de la Puente
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COMMENTS
Dr Antony Theodore
26 November 2015
Drinking from the same chalice,
We taste the same curse:
'Beauty,
You bring us Truth'. poetic diction... drinking from the chalice. a sign of friendship. very well written. thank you dear poet. tony
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Chinedu Dike
06 July 2015
Beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated, nicely penned in poetic diction with conviction. Indeed good friends drink from the same chalice. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
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Vinod Kumar
17 June 2010
I repeat the old proverbe a friend in need a friend indeed, nice poem 10+
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Afzal Shauq
04 October 2009
Little as we are,
we look through the same keyhole
to sometimes have
a good finishing touch.
well written poem and professionally expressed..i like the way you write..and here you did meaningful way of idea..well done 10/10
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Reshma Ramesh
23 December 2008
aweee............such a lovely write................very well penned! !
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Miriam Maia Padua
18 October 2008
hi...true friendship last...every second, every minute, every hour together is valued and remembered always...great piece on friendship.....thanks for sharing..God bless
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<font color =fusha>Amy
13 September 2008
so many emotions involved. Great piece- hope you continue to write
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Vidyadhar Durgekar
11 June 2008
Very positive outlook
Lucky to have nice freinds
Good...........poem
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Lolita Hiroshi
01 May 2008
awesome writ :) so many feelings involved that i kind of got lost..... i really like reading this :)
keep up the work,
Lolita
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Meggie Gultiano
12 September 2007
a beautiful tribute to a friend..love it!
take care..Meggie
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