Thursday, October 23, 2008

.3. Stranger Comments

Rating: 4.5

Unknown people stranger’s faces
Stare at you in unknown places
Caring faces some are not
Places never care a lot
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David Threadgold
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Robert Siney 23 October 2008

I really like this. I enjoyed how the story grew as the paragraphs went on. Nice work Mr Threadgold.

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