30 Seconds Of Me Poem by M.J. Henderson

30 Seconds Of Me

Rating: 5.0


I’m falling.
As I fall I see faces.
Half I know,
And either love them to bits,
Or don’t appreciate them for who they are.

The others,
Are the unknown.
Figures of my future,
Or my past.

The faces fly past me as I’m falling.
As they go past,
They say things.
Things that I want,
Or need.

They promise to make,
The pain go away,
To fix my broken heart.
They say they can give me,
A gun,
A knife,
And even a bridge.

Then the faces disappear,
And darkness enfolds me,
I’m picking up speed,
And I see the ground.

It’s getting closer,
And closer.

Then BANG!

I wake up.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M.j. Henderson 03 January 2012

: D thanks 4 all ur lovely comments [3

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 03 January 2012

very sweet dear. keep growing. lots of love. abhimanyu kumar.s

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Romeo Della Valle 26 October 2011

Brilliant! A well penned and amazing write that clearly gives you away! Great poetic talent you have been blessed with! 10+++ Keep it up, Mandy! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ... If time permits, please check my most recent posted poem titled: Like a Butterfly, hoping you enjoy! ....

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M.j. Henderson 25 October 2011

thanks. i still havent hit the ground

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Geoffrey Ngoima Ndegwa. 24 October 2011

Man, that is some dream! Suggestions, promises.... Nicely written....

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