stan pelfrey

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304 ~ Illusions - Poem by stan pelfrey

seep, tears cloud passion
joy-making fondness
liquid dreams
fattening bits of sweetness
love's an illusion
when you're in love
the further away, the better

sing, notes drip slowly
feet-pounding daisies
oceanic views
descending supplies of dandies
sight's an illusion
when you see clearly
the closer you are, the less you see

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  • (4/11/2006 5:22:00 AM)

    Stan...very profound and true and beautifully put.
    Only thing is that we forget this everytime we are in love or we see something.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 11, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 11, 2007

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