#340 Haiku Serenade In Red Comments

Dorothy, Your inner eye, your inner voice, in deep synchronisation!

#1 This one links together nicely the sun, earth and sky. “Serenades” is a good choice of words evoking the coming of evening and the beginning of a love story portrayed via opera, although operas are usually stories with complicated plots of love affairs, in which case the “red” could be a hint of this. “Red velvet” can be two colors implying motion, change, or things evolving. Altogether a closely knit, beautiful picture. Much more to this poem than I first realized. #2 This poem plays with my eyes and imagination once again including a sense of motion with ribbons moving (harmonizing) .