5am Regretful Poem by Effie Yalena Steyn

5am Regretful



Pretend never hurts, as I fall, hold me. It means nothing.
Maybe so elegant, wish-fulfilment, parade of idiocy mistreated me,
like fools worshipping mistakes when in paradise
remembering all night to go back. Insight,
slipping and fluid calls help for unknown mystical remedy
only you can save me now
but I will never ask to be saved.
Never did, never could, and now I
never will.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aurora Bell 25 April 2010

You can see why one might get that idea.... I do like this one though; wonderfully pesimistic. 'like fools worshipping mistakes'; some lines are just meant to exist. Sorry about the rant; beautiful as always. A x

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