6: 58 A.M. Poem by Chester Whitfield

6: 58 A.M.

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driving down the hill I
looked out over the
sprawling town

and smirked at the layer
of cotton laid out like
a blanket over the sleeping town

and I hoped that the town would
squirm and smother under
that fog blanket

but when I got into town I
looked up and saw the same
lonely sky I see every morning

such false hopes

Friday, May 19, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: fog
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Gale 21 May 2006

The beauty of the sky can be deceiving. Look around the blanket. Splendid imagery you have displayed. Patricia Gale

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