Sunday, August 17, 2008

.6. Billy’s Boat Comments

Rating: 5.0

Billy the goat was a builder
With his nanny he built a small boat
They collected up bark twigs and oak leaves
Plus bits from the farmers torn coat
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David Threadgold
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Michael Hubbert 02 September 2008

David..thank you for your very nice comments on my poems. You're right, we do share a similar style. We both have imagination, and we're rhymers. I loved your poem Billy's Boat. Got to go..so I can read your other poems! Mike

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Fay Slimm 31 August 2008

Oh I love this one. We are all children at heart and I laughed and chuckled at your lovely sense of imaginative humour Dave. Ten it is.

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