7even Poem by Jordan Salinas

7even



7 days, know no fear
6 people shed a tear
5 birds drink beer
4 men linger asteer
3 mice leave in gear
2 eyes see near
1 mind writes this here

Friday, April 17, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: birds
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Josh Bashline 06 May 2009

very inspirational...it motivated me to study the fine works of sir isac in mid century london where he and i quote ' count down from seven and tell the tales of time.' ur words speak to angels and leave demons speachless..well done sir..well done

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Debra Kemper 21 April 2009

Whoa! This could be part of a children's counting book! Do you think? It made me smile :)

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