Dan Brown

Rookie - 62 Points (20.02.1988 / Newcastle-Upon-Tyne, UK)

99.9% - Poem by Dan Brown

Your mind thinks as it should,
And your mouth says as it should.
The words are right, your eyes are bright,
And there’s a smile across your face.
But your heart is absent; in a different place.

Comments about 99.9% by Dan Brown

  • (5/17/2008 4:09:00 PM)

    liked it...but the heart counts for more than 0.1%, doesn't it? (Report) Reply

    1 person liked.
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  • (1/29/2008 3:48:00 PM)

    Well-written, thought provoking short poem. (Report) Reply

  • (1/17/2006 7:02:00 PM)

    It's a bit simple which can be a good thing, sometimes. Reading it, I thought it was missing something, though. Not sure what. All in all not a bad poem. (Report) Reply

  • Aram Stefanian (1/6/2006 9:36:00 AM)

    I loved it! Good work, Dan!
    9 from me
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 4, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, February 28, 2011

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