Dan Brown

Newcastle-Upon-Tyne, UK
Dan Brown
Newcastle-Upon-Tyne, UK
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Rating: 4.6
Your mind thinks as it should,
And your mouth says as it should.
The words are right, your eyes are bright,
And there’s a smile across your face.
But your heart is absent; in a different place.
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COMMENTS
Mehreen Tahir 17 May 2008
liked it...but the heart counts for more than 0.1%, doesn't it?
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Well-written, thought provoking short poem.
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Joy Vanderhelm 17 January 2006
It's a bit simple which can be a good thing, sometimes. Reading it, I thought it was missing something, though. Not sure what. All in all not a bad poem.
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Aram Stefanian 06 January 2006
I loved it! Good work, Dan! 9 from me
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