Friday, April 3, 2015

A Balloon Peddler Comments

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He walks through a road, a lonely or busy. He carries a stick, swings balloons, different colors, each, foran owner different.
He sings a songs, children attract as bee to honey;
Melody heard form distance; small hands search piggy bank, coins few;
Got them at last, dashes every little soul, for gift they grip.
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swati agarwal 04 April 2015

Good description of a balloon peddler

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By point by point the poet has made a clear image of Balloon paddler those are in village festivals in Kerala wandering with the Balloons.A good poem and likes.

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