A Barrel Of Beauty Poem by Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India

A Barrel Of Beauty

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Life -
A barrel of beauty.

Interior and exterior -
Very tasty.

Let us not split,
Not spit.

Let us stay with our own
Weight and height.

Monday, December 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walker 04 December 2017

You end the poem with a telling comment: ' Let us stay with our own/ Weight and height'. I try to keep my weight down, as I dislike obesity and like to look slim. But weight gain is a problem for me, and sometimes I do not succeed. I have to keep my own height as I can't grow any taller-a rule of nature. However, I still want to be a couple of inches taller and dream that it could happen. A most thought-provoking poem, very well structured.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 December 2017

Concise but meaningful. Thank u sir.

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Gajanan Mishra

Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
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