iam prayen for a better tomorrow
a tomorrow with out sorrow
a day wth out pain
i would be willing to pay
but the price is life
knowing this makes me think twice
i pray for a day without sorrow
hopefully god will give it to me tomorrow
i would be willing to pay but the price is life knowing this makes me think twice good passionate lines... many of us wish for a better tomorrow. this is written well. Becca
i was charged that same price, then forgot about it, it isn't worth it, so i'm stuck still waitin for a better tommorow also. :) nice write, keep it up. ~paris
I really like this poem... Keep it up good job! Homeslice
wow, tis really deep, i like it kind'a sad but hopeful in a way great job =D
hey good job man, I like the sense of hope it's not all despair very very good
.....and we're talking about my writing? 1. this is good. 2. almost like mine in a way, which i thought you dissed....? ? : ( 3. this is wayy good. there is nothing wrong with wanting something more. xx millie xx
i think this is great. i wish i had a better tomorrow to. Johnny...u have true talent..keep writing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I love it Johnny.. Nothing like hoping for a better tomorrow keep it up you have true talent =0)