Friday, May 18, 2007

A Brief Moment Comments

Rating: 5.0

On the soft grass we sat
Enjoying our time together.
The walk we took to get there
Wore you out and made you tired.
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Malcolm Stewart
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Jerry Hughes 18 May 2007

...the poignant line 'nothing lasts forever' sums it up

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Derrick Clark 18 May 2007

very well written, keep it up.

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