A Brief Mystical Note! Poem by Ramesh T A

A Brief Mystical Note!

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A sudden down pour of rain with lightning and thunders
Has left some clouds forming everyday giving the doubts
Whether rain will come or not the torrid situation continues
Trapping heat of the day with heat waves even in the even!

Due to previous day’s rain filling ponds and wells here invite
Birds and small animals to drink water with hope and relief!
Of them whistling thrush bird’s long musical note fills the air
Giving joyful mood before the greenhouse effect tires all day!

Moon thro’ the interspersed clouds produces mystical mood
In the evening when flute vendor plays a moving musical note
That transports to the heavenly region of divine bliss in the
Cool breeze slowly changing the situation to relieve exhaustion!

In this blessed mystical mood the bliss enjoyed cannot be
So easily let loose though time passes without our knowledge!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shakuntala Sharma 07 September 2009

I like your poem; it does create 'the blessed mystical mood'

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Ramesh T A

Ramesh T A

Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India
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