A Beacon Of Love! Poem by Ramesh T A

A Beacon Of Love!

Rating: 4.9


Lonely as a cloud I was walking on the beach;
Pain of love lost I was trying to forget in Nature.

Reclined I on a sand meadow musing over Moon.
Moon light beam was falling on the dancing waves
As light house beacon from the horizon to the shore
Enlightening and guiding the sea faring boats there!

A 173 year old defunct light house is still standing
As a memorial to the tourists coming to the beach!
The past love too as the light house beacon remains
In the mind forever to revive the glory of past times!

Love bloomed as green plant but remains as blue Sky;
But the past memory of love ever gives joy in dreams!
Everyone’s life has a meaning for all to learn afterwards;
But memory of love lives in the world till the end of time!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Walterrean Salley 10 November 2009

Love is natural, And, in this poem, I love the way you have shown the related similarities between love and nature itself. Beautifully done. 10

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Ramesh T A 20 August 2015

Thanks for your comment on the poem bringing out the related similarities between love and Nature!

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Stacey Watts 20 October 2009

Very beautiful here. You create an imagery of loss of a love. It was like watching a master painter. You captured this wonderfully. Excellent job.

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Ramesh T A 20 August 2015

Thanks a lot for your generous appreciation of this poem wonderfully excellent one!

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The chosen one 24 July 2022

The chosen one

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 February 2022

Lonely as a cloud I was walking on the beach; Pain of love lost I was trying to forget in Nature.....superb! Loved this fascinating poem dear poet.....top score!

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Ramesh T A 16 February 2022

Wonderful way of appreciating a Poet you know very well as an Art, my friend!

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 December 2020

Reclined I on a sand meadow musing over Moon. Moon light beam was falling on the dancing waves As light house beacon from the horizon to the shore Enlightening and guiding the sea faring boats there! Sense of loss and how the nature perceptions cure it. tony

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 July 2019

Everyone’s life has a meaning for all to learn afterwards; But memory of love lives in the world till the end of time! .......// beautifully written; love it Sir

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 May 2019

Love bloomed as green plant but remains as blue Sky....scintillating poetic expression my friend! Thoroughly enjoyed reading this magnificent piece of work......10

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Ramesh T A

Ramesh T A

Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India
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