A Broken Friendship Poem by Shilesha Johnson

A Broken Friendship

Rating: 5.0


You out of my life was definitely a good thing
I felt like I was committed to being your friend
The only difference is there was no ring
I feel like you and I were just always on a different page
And every time I tried to go to the next chapter
You were holding me back and yet I stayed
I thought that you would change
ALWAYS acting like you were on your menstrual
I excused it hopin it would go away
But it was an everyday thing for you
I never trusted you completely
And I believe that truly
I even told you a couple of times
I guess I was SO right
For feeling the way I did
Some 'best friend'
Who cares about the broken relationship?
I seriously would not go back and change things if I could
Because you went TOO far
I don't see why I should;
Feel any remorse
To the friendship that was lost
Because a friendship that can't be fixed
In my eyes is a friendship that didn't exist
And back then anything is what I would risk
Just for you because my heart was that big
Now if you was to ever get hit by a car
Seeing you in the hospital with flowers
Would have to be thought about long and hard
Scratch that
I can't be like that
Cause the person that I am
Will always care if something bad ever happened
But under any other circumstances will you and I be relaxin
you and I will never be cool
Because you crossed way over the line
And I’m done wit you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2009

You out of my life was definitely a good thing I felt like I was committed to being your friend The only difference is there was no ring I feel like you and I were just always on a different page...oh so bitter cross overand desertation...but is not the hard aspect of life...it brings lot of pain and misery in life..i loved the way u put in....10 miss i miss u......divorce...no separate ways......anywhere

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Kesav Easwaran 12 July 2009

'...you and I were just always on a different page And every time I tried to go to the next chapter You were holding me back and yet I stayed'... nice lines there... explain very eloquently why and how the relation broke...frank and expressive write Shilesha...well written piece...10

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Shekhar Joshi 29 May 2009

ALWAYS acting like you were on your menstrual........ haha...lol i fear if u two ever were friends....even before u had not broken that relationship good work though

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Ershad Mazumder 11 November 2008

Very good theme and expression. But read repeatedly and edit. All great poets use to edit for several times before going for publication.

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