A Broken Friendship Poem by Shilesha Johnson

A Broken Friendship

Rating: 5.0


You out of my life was definitely a good thing
I felt like I was committed to being your friend
The only difference is there was no ring
I feel like you and I were just always on a different page
And every time I tried to go to the next chapter
You were holding me back and yet I stayed
I thought that you would change
ALWAYS acting like you were on your menstrual
I excused it hopin it would go away
But it was an everyday thing for you
I never trusted you completely
And I believe that truly
I even told you a couple of times
I guess I was SO right
For feeling the way I did
Some 'best friend'
Who cares about the broken relationship?
I seriously would not go back and change things if I could
Because you went TOO far
I don't see why I should;
Feel any remorse
To the friendship that was lost
Because a friendship that can't be fixed
In my eyes is a friendship that didn't exist
And back then anything is what I would risk
Just for you because my heart was that big
Now if you was to ever get hit by a car
Seeing you in the hospital with flowers
Would have to be thought about long and hard
Scratch that
I can't be like that
Cause the person that I am
Will always care if something bad ever happened
But under any other circumstances will you and I be relaxin
you and I will never be cool
Because you crossed way over the line
And I’m done wit you

Friday, October 10, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship,relationship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2009

You out of my life was definitely a good thing I felt like I was committed to being your friend The only difference is there was no ring I feel like you and I were just always on a different page...oh so bitter cross overand desertation...but is not the hard aspect of life...it brings lot of pain and misery in life..i loved the way u put in....10 miss i miss u......divorce...no separate ways......anywhere

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Kesav Easwaran 12 July 2009

'...you and I were just always on a different page And every time I tried to go to the next chapter You were holding me back and yet I stayed'... nice lines there... explain very eloquently why and how the relation broke...frank and expressive write Shilesha...well written piece...10

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Shekhar Joshi 29 May 2009

ALWAYS acting like you were on your menstrual........ haha...lol i fear if u two ever were friends....even before u had not broken that relationship good work though

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Ershad Mazumder 11 November 2008

Very good theme and expression. But read repeatedly and edit. All great poets use to edit for several times before going for publication.

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