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A Broken Friendship

Rating: 5.0
You out of my life was definitely a good thing
I felt like I was committed to being your friend
The only difference is there was no ring
I feel like you and I were just always on a different page
And every time I tried to go to the next chapter
You were holding me back and yet I stayed
I thought that you would change
ALWAYS acting like you were on your menstrual
I excused it hopin it would go away
But it was an everyday thing for you
I never trusted you completely
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2009
You out of my life was definitely a good thing I felt like I was committed to being your friend The only difference is there was no ring I feel like you and I were just always on a different page...oh so bitter cross overand desertation...but is not the hard aspect of life...it brings lot of pain and misery in life..i loved the way u put in....10 miss i miss u......divorce...no separate ways......anywhere
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Kesav Easwaran 12 July 2009
'...you and I were just always on a different page And every time I tried to go to the next chapter You were holding me back and yet I stayed'... nice lines there... explain very eloquently why and how the relation broke...frank and expressive write Shilesha...well written piece...10
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Shekhar Joshi 29 May 2009
ALWAYS acting like you were on your menstrual........ haha...lol i fear if u two ever were friends....even before u had not broken that relationship good work though
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Ershad Mazumder 11 November 2008
Very good theme and expression. But read repeatedly and edit. All great poets use to edit for several times before going for publication.
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