Tuesday, June 28, 2011

A Broken Fruit Comments

Rating: 5.0

To you, I am, but just a little fruit,
I am, but one lonely mango growing in the tropics,
a guava on a helpless quest to remain on your wild branch,
an orange cringing to feed on your love,
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Romeo Della Valle 03 July 2011

Excellent, well penned and poignant write which shows to me that you have what it takes to make it through the Poetry World: TALENT! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always!

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