A Broken Heart Poem by Timothy Venard

A Broken Heart

Rating: 5.0


A broken heart
A single tear
A broken heart
A pain for years
A broken heart
A ruined life
A broken heart
A blood stained knife

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 15 October 2009

nice anaphora '' a broken heart'' wonderful poem............10

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Aleisha Luyt 23 September 2009

love comes love goes through every single one it flows is it good or is it bad but in the end someone is always left sad Great poem short but makes sense great work

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Shirley Woods 16 September 2009

Hiya Tim, Short, sharp and to the point quite literally - well done!

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Susan Jarvis 16 September 2009

Some very vivid imagery in so very few words. Repetition is used effectively and adds to the impact. A powerful piece of poetry - excellent stuff! S :)

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