R.Benjamin Abate

Rookie - 468 Points (06/22/90 / Mattydale, NY)

A Bug - Poem by R.Benjamin Abate

When I was a
A bug flew
Into my eye

I felt it moving
& I've never felt
Something so

Comments about A Bug by R.Benjamin Abate

  • Cynthia Buhain-baello (6/9/2013 7:18:00 PM)

    Concise and vivid, engaging write. (Report) Reply

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  • (6/4/2013 8:53:00 PM)

    Brief sweet and full of vibrancy.

    I had a bug on my nose but it stun like rose, I never felt so much pain
    Stellar read
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  • Diane Hine (5/31/2013 6:37:00 AM)

    A close-up you'll never forget! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 30, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, May 31, 2013

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