Sylvia Chidi

Freshman - 650 Points (Germany)

A Car Is Just A Car! - Poem by Sylvia Chidi

A car is a car
If it can ride you nearby or far

A car is a car
When it gets you in time to the bar

A car is a car
When you are addressed as Madam or Sir

But for some
A car is not just a car
It is a home
After a daylight roam
It is a home
After a nightly roam
Kind of like a homelessness
Reoccurring syndrome

Now give me any banger of a car
I'll give it hotly showers of a sauna
Play sweet tunes to it from a guitar
By the time you watch me stand by it
And pose with an exotic cigar
Waiting to take you out to dinar
You may even prefer it to a modernised jaguar

You see, to me
A car is just a car
Be it in a new silver shining coat
Or one decorated with tarnished scars
The simple reality
Is they all have similar
Passenger capacity

Whether be it a personalised 8 seater stretch limousine
Or a Ferrari with an exploding roaring engine
A car is a car
A vehicle of motion
A medium of transportation
Even when it shows signs of erosion
As long as it can move from junction to junction
I personally sanction

A car is just a car

Copyright 2006 - Sylvia Chidi

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Comments about A Car Is Just A Car! by Sylvia Chidi

  • (6/1/2018 10:43:00 PM)

    Take you out to 'dinar' (Report) Reply

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  • (3/26/2018 11:24:00 AM)

    A car is just a peice of metal, but when you bumping 21 in it, it comes alive, but i disagree with this poem, smart cars are the way to go. (Report) Reply

    (5/4/2018 12:37:00 PM)

    i personally disagree, i need space and a smart car does not offer that they have neither power nor grace i can't drive one without fearing what I'll look like if some hits me but that's a personal opinion

  • (1/30/2018 6:40:00 AM)

    I disagree. Cars have souls. (Report) Reply

    (2/5/2018 3:21:00 PM)

    no they're non-living objects

  • (1/30/2018 6:38:00 AM)

    i hate this poem cars a more than just cars they have different colour wheels (Report) Reply

  • (12/11/2017 6:55:00 PM)

    beautiful poem (Report) Reply

  • Brian Jani (7/5/2014 4:58:00 PM)

    a car has become a necessity in many peoples day to day lives. (Report) Reply

  • Malini Kadir (3/14/2014 9:20:00 PM)

    yes A car is a car when it gets you from point A to B (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (3/19/2013 12:04:00 PM)

    A car is just a car. You are sure right about this one. it does not matter whether
    it is a Lexus or an old fashioned Ford long as it gets you from point A to point B. A
    good write. Much appreciated.
    (Report) Reply

  • (3/12/2013 7:54:00 PM)

    I think this poem might need more anus blood but very well done!
    (Report) Reply

  • The Stig (12/4/2012 1:43:00 PM)

    A writer is just a writer! (Report) Reply

  • (10/20/2012 4:08:00 AM)

    I love love love this it is cool my mam dad sister brother all like this one it has my big thumbs up. (Report) Reply

  • (9/11/2007 8:56:00 AM)

    i love how you send seemingly simplistic message with such sound and clarity. again, nice one. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 23, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 7, 2012

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