A Certain Ray Of Light Poem by DM W

A Certain Ray Of Light

Rating: 5.0


A certain ray of light lingers for a while
On my desk. Yet it will soon dissolve in time,
Like everything else in this fleeting world.
I gaze at it, as I try to form apt words,
Relating to Beauty's infinite designs.
Everywhere, we can discover its signs.
And sometimes, we can be taken by surprise,
Just like this subtle light which weighs on my mind.

Tuesday, August 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,light,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 05 August 2020

Another neat and so concise well written poem Dominic and again another superbly written end line to tie up your beaming poem of light. So astutely imagined and presented. 10++ and again well deserved and your pen does compose many varied themed poems. A great mind at work and a joy to read. Many thanks and take care.

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