Sunday, November 9, 2008

A Childs Prayer Comments

Rating: 5.0

she lays in bed crying
no one comes to comfort her
she is afraid to write it down
it just might make it real
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rohit sapra 15 November 2008

This poem is really so emotional which expresses the pain of a child who is puzzled with situations life has put her into and the pain doesn't lessen as she is afraid is why she should pray to god for a guiding star to help her see the light. I really liked reading this poem of yours.

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Barbara Vanier 09 November 2008

Oh Heather... I just cried when I read this. Youve taken my breath away.

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Barbara Terry 09 November 2008

Child abuse is so rampant these days. There are a lot of people that should never be parents, because they haven't got the discipline. To hurt a young child in this manner is just so heartwrenching, it tears at the very fabric of the soul. This reminds me of my poem, Please Don't Tread On Me. Thank you for sharing this with us and letting us see the sickest part of human nature. You get a 10 from me, and I need a tissue. Hugs, Barbara

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Fiona Davidson 09 November 2008

This is so heartrending...made me feel I was there with this child....real food for thought..thank you for showing us...

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