Wednesday, December 28, 2005

A Childs World Comments

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what kind of world is it my friend
that little children see?
I wonder if they see god first
because they just believe?
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Ashley Olson
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Greenwolfe 1962 18 February 2008

This is real genuine poetry. It's, by far, the best I've read since I always start somewhere in the middle. I think I've read six or eight. The best part is the phrasing you used. This is a quality of music which you must have somewhere in your background. Around here, that quality is quite rare. Well done. Greenwolfe 1962

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BEAU GOLDEN 20 July 2006

that is a pretty poem Ashley i especially enjoyed the ending! Cant wait to read more!

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