A Commentary Poem by RIC BASTASA

A Commentary



while, it, is true,
that i empathize with
what, you are now,

are there rough
storms inside
your mind?

are you a ship
without an anchor?

or an ant crushed
by a stone?
still breathing
the last

whatever,

there is a must still
to learn
this craft of survival
through
poetry as medium
of angst,

of internal wars
unseen
by any human
ordinary eye

Sunday, March 7, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: angst,storms
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RIC BASTASA

RIC BASTASA

Philippines
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