Sunday, November 11, 2012

A Contraceptive Pill Comments

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Afore falling in his arms they advice to think twice
Unregretful I act beyond my surprise
It's the grip of a force, a force here to claim
Compelling, like a moth drawn to the flame
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Neha Godambe
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Khairul Ahsan 04 September 2013

An excellent modern poem. Yes, enigmatic emotions! 'Every night encloses the heat of flaming souls' is a beautiful perception. 'Nevertheless, I look at kids and fall for their innocence Wish the pill could kill within me my maternal pretence! ' A stark realization!

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Neha Godambe

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