A Cuppa Is Fine Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

A Cuppa Is Fine



If, after frustration and curses
for thirteen eight line verses,
all those verses
rhyme a-a-a-b-c-c-c-b,
you can be proud
and an appreciative crowd
can applaud out loud
and shout you something stronger than tea.

Unless, but for the rhyme it's weak,
or by rhyme's demands it's made weak,
with the likes of 'sheik',
when it's set in Roman Pompeii.
'Thirteen verses' in verse one, I said.
For 'thirteen', 'two' can be read.
Rhyming more than a twain I dread.
Besides, a cuppa is fine by me.

Monday, May 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: pride,rhyme,suffering
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Hardy did 13 in what he said was his finest: A Trampwoman's Tragedy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 14 May 2018

Douglas, have you excelled yourself? Nice cuppa.

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Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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