A Day's Advice Poem by Hamsa Elfarash

A Day's Advice



I was about to fly,
Up in the sky,
But it wasn't that jocund day,
So I had to stay.

'What did I do? ' I exclaimed,
'I just want a happy life,
And you're offering me a knife,
What is that named? '

'Oh, look who's talking? ! ' Replied my day,
'You've put me in totall darkness,
And you're acting as a princess?
Well.. Listen to what I'll say.'

I know.. You're deeply ashamed,
And you turned your back to the past,
So you've got a chance that stayed,
But be careful.. It's the last.

Try to make use of it,
To colour in your mind and draw,
An awesome life with a little bit,
Of things that come and go.

Life won't stop,
Dance and hip hop,
Go and fly,
Up so high!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 December 2013

Great rhyming dialogue poem to yor love! Nicely writen. Pls coment my latest poem too.

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Hamsa Elfarash

Hamsa Elfarash

Alexandria, Egypt
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