Asma Zenjali


A Death Story - Poem by Asma Zenjali

One day in a rainy day
Where there was no one but you and me
We laughed like two insane
We danced like it's all okay
I saw what you couldn't say
I felt your hidden pain
You smiled looking at my eyes
You knew the much my heart cries
You were the light of my nights
my life flame
You were the rain wash my pain
Now you gone away
The night came so dark and cold
With shining stars as in the sky were hold
You closed your eyes
with silence over the place
You left the life with a smiling face
I would cry, and deny
That you gone away
I would try stop the pain
..But it's all in vain
One time in a rainy day
Where there was no one but you and me
We laughed like two insane
We danced like it's all okay
Now it's all end..
since you left that day
Now it's all end..
Only memories could stay
I stand where your coffin lay
with raised hands.. for you i pray...

Topic(s) of this poem: death

Form: Lyric


Comments about A Death Story by Asma Zenjali

  • Sayeed Abubakar (1/1/2016 7:00:00 AM)


    Asma, your poem is very touchy and full of deep feelings. True to say, I got emotional reading your poem. A poem demands control of passion in language. (Report) Reply

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  • Abderrahmane Dakir (12/25/2015 5:43:00 AM)


    I like it so much. Your words come from the core of your heart. Thank you so much. (Report) Reply

    Asma Zenjali Asma Zenjali (12/29/2015 3:24:00 PM)

    You are welcome thanks for your opinion ^^

  • Sayeed Abubakar (12/16/2015 9:42:00 AM)


    Very touchy, soft and green poem. I can feel your heart through this poem. It's the success of a poem surely. (Report) Reply

    Asma Zenjali Asma Zenjali (12/16/2015 2:56:00 PM)

    Thank you sayeed i am glad for your opinion :)

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (12/16/2015 3:07:00 AM)


    I saw what you couldn't say
    I felt your hidden pain
    You smiled looking at my eyes,
    Light of my nights
    I stand where your coffin lay, a great love story
    Written in clear words. your simplicity helps me to read and enjoy the emotions in your words. Thank you very much. tony
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    Asma Zenjali Asma Zenjali (12/16/2015 3:05:00 PM)

    You are welcome tony i am glad you did with pleasure :)

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 11, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 13, 2016


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