A Dream Poem by kaavyaa kriday

A Dream

Rating: 5.0


Sun settles, moon settled,
And so are all who breathe;
Many love it sound,
Rest full of dreams.

Some do it in the day,
Keeping all at bay.
It drives everyone,
Hell to heaven.

Led by struggle,
Path laid with trouble;
Many break
Trying to make,
Give up
Half the way;
Can’t foresee,
Driven by its glee.
One’s who achieve,
Feels they’ve lived.
It makes you feel good
Or compels to do bad.
It becomes your passion,
With none to compare.

Such is its power,
Great is its charm
It gives you courage,
Introduces mountains,
To be crossed..

Sadly many get it under the moon,
Others build it in the noon.
But same is for all, the beginning;
Dream to get your dream.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 16 November 2008

Your words sound quite matured in most of the poems so far I've read...you sound talented..and this poem too a great piece..keep writing 10 +

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Kesav Easwaran 16 November 2008

very meaningful poem...written melodious and sweet...the last stanza especially standing out...well done, Ambika 10

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