Sunday, June 17, 2007

A Dream Is A Wish Your Heart Makes Comments

Rating: 5.0

In your old nursery
we ride the rocking horse

of your childhood
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Dónall Dempsey
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Gina Pisapia 06 August 2007

And wow again! This is just...lovely. What a beautiful journey to make through someone's past and all through the magical talisman of the rocking horse. This is a perfect dream of a poem...a fairy tale come through. You way of expressing love and awarenes is just so beautiful at times but you have surpased yourself here. This is just a gorgeous sumptious feast of words and conceits fused together by the strength of your storytelling. You have brought all the elements together and fused them into a very special piece of writing. Wow and wow! GinaXXX

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Scarlett Treat 21 June 2007

Yepper, Scarlett DOES like your poems...and you! Wonderful poet that you are, both in poetry and prose...

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Alice Vedral Rivera 20 June 2007

Wow. I can see why Scarlett likes your poems. Definitely a 10 from me. I especially like the ending. avr

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Dónall Dempsey

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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