indira babbellapati

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A Funeral In Isolation* - Poem by indira babbellapati

i carefully place
myself on the pyre of
dreams that desert me
from time to time...

my ears intently tune
themselves to hear
the message of futility
conveyed through
the crackling of chips

everywhere on this island
insulated by the salt waters
my soul roams about in
desperation for a release

*on reading mr.arkay dass' 'Island of Isolation'

06may2010
13.20hrs


Comments about A Funeral In Isolation* by indira babbellapati

  • Vidyadhar Durgekar (5/24/2010 1:07:00 AM)


    Touching funeral in words................. (Report) Reply

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  • Leonard Dabydeen (5/16/2010 8:55:00 PM)


    ...as you wash away the salinity, everything will become clearer...only to release you. Enjoy the read.

    Blessings.
    Leonard
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  • Saadat Tahir (5/6/2010 6:37:00 AM)


    abso beautiful
    have to catch up...missed a lot..

    cheers and ten
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 6, 2010

Poem Edited: Sunday, July 18, 2010


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