a girl named hate
stood at heavens gate
just wishing to be let in
she breathed out sin
and they shuned her
her pain a blur
she walked away
to try again another day
a girl named hate
stood at hells gate
she breathed out sin
and they let her in
they did not judge her
they loved her for sure
and there she will stay
day after day
that girl named hate
broke away from fate
she stayed were she fit in
she stayed with her sin
they did not hate her
they befriended her
things usualy turn out that way
when you tell some one to go away
Very imaginiative and scary. There are lots of girls that can relate to this I'm sure.
This is an interesting thought provoking piece of poetry! Great rhyme scheme and imagery. Great job with much truth weaved throughout...........thanx for sharing! ! =Shelley=
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
shunNed..... I Love this 'hate-girl' poem! maybe i shall meet her when i die! ? are you alive? still on PH? to MyPoemList. bri :)