Sunday, November 26, 2023

A Good Game Comments

Rating: 4.0

A good game is a game,
In that the defeat is not a shame,
It wasn't your day, bad luck,
My sweet little duck,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Bri Edwards 19 January 2024

Maybe now YOU can be MY 'teacher'. I 'love' your use of 'frost' and 'little duck' and...your fine rhyming. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 19 January 2024

I was hasty and gave you only 4 stars. I'd give 5 now if I could. Instead I've made it a favorite.

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Bri Edwards 19 January 2024

Akhtar, You had a big 'winner' of a poem until the last line. Is 'glace' supposed to read/be 'grace'? I'll bet it is. I'm sorry Pakistan is having trouble with another country (I think I read today) . Best wishes. bri ;)

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