Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 399,117 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

A Good Surprise - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

This is true
It is for you
To listen and not hasten
Why it is all of sudden?

I was surprised at your kind words
I was waiting and looking forward
It was unexpected change but not known
At right time you have mage it known

There may be many errors
We can’t find it out or see in mirrors
We only have to make some changes
It will be nice if we can well manage

Either of two can make a good start
Some has to forgo and part
It is good to be little considerate
The attitude and behavior should moderate

You stand to gain a lot
The iron should be hammered when it is hot
It may come with the passage of time
You must decide and set it as prime

It will be appreciated if you submit little or relent
You will feel good and not receive any adverse comment
It will be altogether kind gesture
It is good for bright future


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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 7, 2010



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