Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Rating: 4.3

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
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Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###
Friday, April 17, 2009
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Sahra Hussein 09 November 2014

beautiful words and heart teaching! !

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A captivating and creative creation. Well done my friend!

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A beautiful poem and its theme and contents in its beauty told by the poet.

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Tajudeen Shah 24 April 2014

whatever you call her behaviour, nature, she has truly been immortalized by your mighty, passionate pen. God Bless. wow factor on the go...

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Jitesh Shah 25 March 2014

very very nice poem and also read my poem sir

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Robert Murray Smith 21 July 2021

This poem marks you as great poet. Congratulations!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 April 2021

Is it blessings to you or gift from Lord? Blessings are gift from the Lord, I reckon.5 Stars Full, Sir! I have enjoyed very much.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 April 2021

I want to dance on floor with glass of wine. Lines full of humor in almost all lines, superbly written!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 April 2021

am so much influenced by lady smile She has entered in life just before while' Life seems to be so interesting and fine I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 April 2021

Life will be full of remorse but still I would forgo....practical. A great write sir...5 stars

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