poet Hasmukh Amathalal

Hasmukh Amathalal

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At First Sight

Perceived love at first sight,
Provide vigour and might,
Against every odds, path right,
Never out of goal keeping in sight,

Always memorable in life,
Dreaming to make her partner or wife,
Ready to sacrifice anything and show,
Always attracted towards beauty and glow,

Wants to build steady trust and grow,
Ready to swim with the water and flow,
Not to miss any chance and offer,
All wishes for happiness and self suffer,

All consequences frighten and create panic,
Even feet too crumble with melody or music,
Thoughts travel faster than light,
Count the stars at dead night,

At such an age awful experience,
Wedding of all watching at fence,
No more kidding but sincere efforts,
Attending all calls from ship at ports,

Waiting for response immediately to follow,
Oh! but courage and strength will not allow,
Always thinking of steps to show her but how?
Attempts to be made not late but now,

All hopes dashing with the news of engagement,
When see all preparations of marriage and movements,
With heavy heart no love to express,
Some weakness in part ready to redress

Poem Submitted: Friday, June 5, 2009
Poem Edited: Monday, June 8, 2009

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  • Paresh ChakraParesh Chakra (12/7/2018 4:23:00 AM)

    I enjoyed reading this poem

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  • Jeff Pua (4/8/2010 4:01:00 AM)

    this is good.. I enjoyed it..

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  • Monica Sevilla (2/23/2010 11:15:00 PM)

    wow what a wonderful poem...

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  • Abby Keen/harrisAbby Keen/harris (2/11/2010 4:58:00 PM)

    i like this :) its awesome! im a real sucker 4 poems like these

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  • Suraj MotiwalaSuraj Motiwala (1/19/2010 11:04:00 PM)

    Nice one! :) enjoyed reading it.

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  • Philip Winchester (9/30/2009 5:41:00 AM)

    My first sight on this site of 'At First Sight' leaves me my friend with pure delight
    of the things you write.To Judge with all my might with my Poetic Right, To call you 'Friend'
    My kind regards perhaps you may see a charm in anothers Prose.
    Philip

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  • Jazza Bella (9/22/2009 1:52:00 PM)

    I really enjoyed this piece thank you

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  • Intan Rianda (9/15/2009 6:49:00 AM)

    great! lovely ^^ i like it
    10 for you

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  • Sagarika Shah (9/7/2009 7:38:00 AM)

    Always memorable in life,
    Dreaming to make her partner or wife, ...10

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  • Twinkle Vohra (9/7/2009 7:31:00 AM)

    All consequences frighten and create panic, ..10

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  • Sai Saketh (9/4/2009 10:19:00 AM)

    Very Nice........
    It does give an opinion on the subject of love at first sight......

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  • Krish Harry (9/1/2009 10:10:00 AM)

    gud 1 dude...........

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  • Deborah CromerDeborah Cromer (8/27/2009 5:04:00 PM)

    Beautiful and with actions ready. Perfect reflex to begin the journey. First steps unto the right path. Nice and well written. DC

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  • Ramdulari Sinha (8/20/2009 11:47:00 AM)

    very good to have first love...10

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  • Sita Kesri (8/20/2009 11:42:00 AM)

    it is unusual to hvae first sight love....10

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  • Sangita Rao (8/20/2009 11:38:00 AM)

    fiarst sight love is always rememebred...10

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  • Edwina K (8/20/2009 11:29:00 AM)

    so memorable is first love....10

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  • Sadia Hussain (8/20/2009 11:25:00 AM)

    love at first sight is welcome always...10

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  • Sam Yang (8/19/2009 11:30:00 AM)

    'All hopes dashing with the news of engagement,
    When see all preparations of marriage and movements,
    With heavy heart no love to express,
    Some weakness in part ready to redress'

    I love those lines. You have a unique style of writing. Keep up the good work! - Sam

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  • Nagesh Ratnavelu (8/18/2009 10:32:00 AM)

    firt sight love i remembered always....10

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