A Haunt's Hush. Poem by Fay Slimm

A Haunt's Hush.

Rating: 5.0


Diamonds of creamed
............................... misty-pearl
Hang in the dank air.

Soundless,
................ the thick calm unfurls
On every leaf there.

The woodland bathes
................................ in the hush.
Shadows are pregnant
With wait,
............. while the deeps of lush
Green sigh,
............................ and childlike
I stand in awe,
............................. undisturbed.
The hushed quiet seeps
..........................into my psyche.

Nothing stirs to break
..................the awesome scene.
Hauntingly placid,
............................ transcendent
And spectred
.......................... with sensation,
This heals with a peace
................................ which stills
My mind so serenely.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 14 September 2009

'Behold her single in the field, Yon solitary highland lass ...............or gently pass' WORDSWORTH I was lost in the music of your poem and the beauty of metaphors, epithets and trasferred eithets you have used. Excellent poetry. CP

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Daniel Kempson 02 September 2009

A beautil poem Fay thank you for asking me to read will pay attention to your work in the future 10 Daniel now off to work

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