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A Day In The Life Of A Child

Rating: 4.7

Cheeks dimpling
Two eyes gleam
Lips parting.
Baby's smiling.

Nose crinkling
Red mouth curls
Eyes are twinkling.
Baby's clowning.

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Alison Cassidy 15 November 2008

A precious little poem, inspired methinks by old nursery rhymes. Love the rhythm, the simplicity of the language and the beat of the piece. Yes, a lovely children's poem for grownups to enjoy. (or vice versa if you like?) love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 10 November 2008

Hello Fay and that was just about picture perfect, I felt as if I was watching the little one through out. Great read! Loyd

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Bob Gibson 14 October 2008

! The most wonderful aroma in this world, is the smell of a baby in a fathers arms, till they need changing of corse!

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Ashley Jarrett 09 October 2008

I like the simplicity of yjis one, just like the life of a child.

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Adam Day 26 September 2008

divine. best word i can use. fay, you have a wonderful way with words.

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Ellen Ni Bheachain 30 April 2020

So simply put and and lovely to read.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 28 July 2015

Sweet piece. Reminds me of my own when infants.Thanks

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Ravi A 05 April 2009

The last four lines are enough. You have rightly hit it. We can also experience the sleep.

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Deva De Silva 16 January 2009

Simplicity and honesty in your tone makes this a wonderful read... Thanks. Deva

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Ivor Hogg 20 November 2008

near perfection in its simplicity M lady

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