Payyton Egerstaffer

Rookie (May 27 / Fort Polk, Louisiana)

A Heart To Spare - Poem by Payyton Egerstaffer

I broke down in tears
When I told you my fears
You patted my back
Then left me to pick up the slack
I kept waiting thinking you’d turn around
But you were gone without a sound
It wasn’t easy to say in the least
For my heart was broken and I had to pick up each piece
How could I ever have thought you cared
If I’d known my heart would have been spared


Comments about A Heart To Spare by Payyton Egerstaffer

  • (6/18/2009 5:48:00 AM)

    vow! beautifull and emotionaloem.
    voted10
    surya
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  • (7/21/2008 9:33:00 AM)

    i love this poem, its sad and amazing (Report)Reply

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  • (7/17/2008 9:06:00 AM)

    I feel the pain in this piece and pray you feel better soon! You have a cute rhyme scheme going there and show alot of promise in your writing!
    Take care of U
    Shelley
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  • (7/16/2008 12:50:00 AM)

    very good,
    very good about a broken heart..

    ilyy booo!

    x3,
    millie
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 16, 2008



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