A Home Is What You Make It Poem by elysabeth faslund

A Home Is What You Make It

Rating: 5.0


Moccasins shed skins against floorboards.
Broken, splintered. Slither. Stealth.
Silent.
Clay-packed crumbly brick. Fireplace glow.
Pecan, oak, cypress, piled under table,
Bed, in corners. Warmth.
Thick window velvet, tattered, bemused with
Years. Dust. Webs. Butlers...long ago
Gone.
One room parlor shack. Mansion cocooned
Moon whispers fluttering, flying lips shriveled.
Moving memories cracked, dry, dessicated.

One yellowed talon-nail scratched her pets
Ears...
'What does the outside do today, eh?
Is this not our world...
Is this not Paradise...? '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 20 November 2008

Yes, a home is what you make it. A home is made of people living in there, not by the furnishing placed in there. Nice poem with Eastern touch in last two lines.

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Scarlett Treat 12 November 2008

I hear a soft southern breeze whispering through the spanish moss as I read...and what a beauty!

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Billy Joe Collins 12 November 2008

a home is what you believe good poem

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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