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A. If Only Amberlee Could See

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If only Amberlee could see
She brought the freedom up in me
If only Amberlee could see

I was amazed after her call
She talked like nobody before
She broke for me my prison wall
I feel my heart now more and more

I was in conflict with my head
A thousand schemes arose in me-
I fell in thoughts down on my bed
If only I could find the key-

You talked to me-
You think; you feel
If you could see
If you'd just heal-

If you would be ugly I would not care
If you would be crazy I would not mind
Nothing you have done is able to scare-
I feel your beauty but you stay so blind

She is so perfect in her way
Though she feels dirty for mistakes
Without her mind my world is grey
And I can feel how she escapes

If only Amberlee could see
She brought the freedom up in me
If only Amberlee could see

Wednesday, November 30, 2005
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kylee Anderson 04 December 2005

You have so much talent. I can tell you will probably become someone really famous after a publisher discovers your poetry.

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Evaughn Gray 31 July 2007

that was a beautifl poem...i felt ur pain..~hazel

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Jalisa Berrain 17 March 2007

This poem is very majestic. It really touched me.

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jennifer hall 19 February 2007

beautiful poem i like it

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S... Che 20 November 2006

WOW thats beautiful.

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Riley Phelps 21 January 2006

I agree with Val... we hope the best ^^

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