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A. If Only Amberlee Could See

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If only Amberlee could see
She brought the freedom up in me
If only Amberlee could see

I was amazed after her call
She talked like nobody before
She broke for me my prison wall
I feel my heart now more and more

I was in conflict with my head
A thousand schemes arose in me-
I fell in thoughts down on my bed
If only I could find the key-

You talked to me-
You think; you feel
If you could see
If you'd just heal-

If you would be ugly I would not care
If you would be crazy I would not mind
Nothing you have done is able to scare-
I feel your beauty but you stay so blind

She is so perfect in her way
Though she feels dirty for mistakes
Without her mind my world is grey
And I can feel how she escapes

If only Amberlee could see
She brought the freedom up in me
If only Amberlee could see

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kylee Anderson 04 December 2005

You have so much talent. I can tell you will probably become someone really famous after a publisher discovers your poetry.

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Evaughn Gray 31 July 2007

that was a beautifl poem...i felt ur pain..~hazel

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Jalisa Berrain 17 March 2007

This poem is very majestic. It really touched me.

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jennifer hall 19 February 2007

beautiful poem i like it

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S... Che 20 November 2006

WOW thats beautiful.

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Riley Phelps 21 January 2006

I agree with Val... we hope the best ^^

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