A Lamentable Thought Poem by K. V. Venkataramana

A Lamentable Thought

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It will not be
A real death for me
If I stop breathing,
Because I will still live in
Flowers, cloud, birds and grass
Which have ever been
Nourished by my love.

But I would be really dead
The moment I found
My pond of love desiccated,
Forcing me to orphan
The beautiful creations of God,
Each of which contains
A bit of my soul.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chitra - 09 July 2008

insightful, a nice profound poem

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Tsira Goge 11 March 2008

'Which have ever been Nourished by my love.' beauteous displaying of feeling... Tsira

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Subbaraman N V 05 March 2008

Kindly refer to mine-'LOVE IS the BASIS of LIFE' in the PH reflecting similar views and message. A nice write. Thanks for sharing.

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Nomi Mas 03 March 2008

wonderful insight... beautiful, thanks

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K. V. Venkataramana

K. V. Venkataramana

Sullia - 574239, Karnataka; .
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