A Desire Poem by K. V. Venkataramana

A Desire

Rating: 5.0


Whenever a flower
Blooms,
It takes care
To look smart, fresh,
Pleasing and memorable;
For it knows that
It blooms only once
During its sojourn on earth.
Likewise,
Why should I not,
When my poetic feelings
Gush to the surface,
Produce pearls of excellence
For all to treasure?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Malini Kadir 06 March 2008

Sure you can and should........

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Alison Cassidy 29 March 2008

Why not indeed? A soft little poem with a tender heart. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Ben Gieske 02 April 2008

You have a soft way of getting us to think about what we do. The next time we look at flowers, your words should spring to mind.

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Pratanu Banerjee 16 February 2021

this is an amazing poem.. all the best.. carry on writing.

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Dr. Antony Theodore 07 February 2021

A great poem indeed with positive notes. tony

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Dr.subhendu Kar 29 June 2009

yes, there you are, poet must bloom with its fragrance spreading all across the space and time as the desire being divine, wonderful aspiration awe-inspiring, yet ingenious write,10++++, thanks for sharing

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Kesav Easwaran 04 April 2008

why not? only thus a poet blooms.... through his words...fresh...pleasing... memorable, like a blooming flower.

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Al Ramos 02 April 2008

A desire must bloom more than once, It should fill many vases and leave an enticing aroma to bloom again. It is why we write. To plant the seed of desire in all. Good job

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K. V. Venkataramana

K. V. Venkataramana

Sullia - 574239, Karnataka; .
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